Went on a bit too long
I thought it was weird how it kept going on after he was born because of the title. The "birth" of course refers a lot more to when he first became a salesman and stuff. I think the best thing was how good the voice acting was. I seriously thought you were using stock footage of Billy Mays' voice until he started talking about the umbilical cord and everything. Another funny part was how the narrator said everything so silly. While it was a little hard to follow and could have been shorter, still good.