Hey, TheShadling's below me! I thought this was a good picture and quite different for you. This doesn't seem to be in your drawing style at all. I guess why a lot of people didn't like it. I think it's good, particularly with how you really know how to work with the color blue. I think there's some green in there. It appears to be mixing in with the yellow outlines.
That might just be my vision. I don't know what that thing in the corner is. I'm guessing it's some kind of food that the pirates are fighting over? People should draw modern pirates. Weebl did once and they're actually pretty cool.