Quite nice!
This has got to be one of the lengtheist descriptions that I have ever read. To me, the theme of this was fighting in a war and getting a big battle or something like that done. It's interesting how you have made so many changes to this. There was even a sci-fi feel to it because of some laser like sounds. The beat was well paced for 3 minutes (or really any time) and it had a lot going for it. All in all, it has a lot of style and a technique that is pretty much something you made on your own.