I love your comment where you praise yourself on animating. This really is worthy of giving yourself a pat on the back. I was in fact hoping for more action. It still works great as a cartoon. I really love this guy's posture. You show strong expressions.
The colors are so beautiful. You have to make the most of something not long. I'd never be able to animate this well, so who am I to judge? The music was pretty cool too. It almost looked like she was kissing him at first!