It was okay
I admit I was a bit impressed by the wizards fighting each other in the beginning with the blood coming in. It was also a great touch to have that funny cat at the end. I am also glad I was able to hear that whole song in one place. I was also very impressed by the very lengthy description, if not the most in anything! I know this was intended to be your first thing and I can understand it not being of the highest quality. I can at least say you certainly have a lot of potential with all the things you put in.