That was short, but still nicely done. I appreciate how much detail is put into everything. It's great to know that you worked on something for University. Just show them this Daily Feature and they'll enjoy it! Maybe it could have used color. How was this an OC?
Oh things not based on existing properties are OCs! Anyway, this was quite unpredictable. I liked the monster's design. The hammer was a cool touch. They might not like how you didn't capitalize anything!