Didn't know where it was going!
It was a little slow at the beginning (I'm not that familiar with your stuff, so it was hard to understand some things) but it got better as it had a lot more of a story as it went on. It was awesome how nearly every joke was pulled together in the end. I really have to praise you for that idea of crotchless chaps equivalent to women's breasts. Dang, that's a good idea!