This was incredible! I was thinking this would be too short or too long. It was amazing with how it gradually grew into a story. I thought this would be a literal tutorial. It was so much better! Congratulations on your Review Crew Pick!
You certainly deserved it! I loved seeing all the characters at the end. I am familiar with a lot of these things, like smears. How dare you call this a monstrosity! It's absolutely wonderful! The world has improved ever so slightly from people enjoying this for any reason!