I have to admit that this is fantastic, but it did go on a bit too long. The parts without the main characters weren't the best. It's still absolutely wonderful to see these two play off of each other. I just wanted to see the two interact more! I am in fact a "Homestuck" fan. I've read most of it.
I still can't remember most of it. You still get most of it right. I especially love how you don't mention the trolls. They don't appear until later. Many people get that wrong.