Wow, that was unexpectedly great! I love how gradually everything was built up. Congrats on your first submission! It's rare that they're as good as this. I especially liked seeing how or what she turned out. I thought maybe she was going to be part of some larger organism.
You know, like a head. The atmosphere was wonderfully creepy. The voice is great. This was certainly longer than most stuff I've seen recently. It would be interesting to know more about this person.