You know, I did feel for her. You gave a good analysis of her character. I really did wonder what would happen to her. It's probably best you didn't show it. I wonder how she felt? You're so humble.
Sometimes it's hard to tell whether or not something will be popular. This does deserve it's popularity. It reminds me of a Creepypasta. Well, I guess any online story can be like that. I like how the title is in first person.