I have not seen the first one, but this doesn't seem that good. It seems to just be a fly getting eaten with Mario coming up and being beheaded. It's too bad you just used a very simple sprite. I admit it's impressive to have a rating this high. You need to work a lot more on drawing. I myself know it's hard to submit things.
It just seems like this had little effort in it. It was nice for it to be so short, I suppose. It was also probably too short. I could not get a feeling for anything that was going on. Capitalization for everything could have worked too.