I didn't think this was that good at first. It really did get better the more it went on. I thought the artwork was quite good. I would have liked it more if it was not just single pictures. It still delivers its message, though. As a guy who's currently going through COMPS, I know what this is like.
If this is your story, I hope it works out for you. I certainly hope it works out well for me too! I got sad seeing you (or him) fail at the end. That's just how it goes sometimes. This had a lot of heart.