Yes, you're back! I so rarely see submissions by my favorite authors nowadays. This seems more like something BlackTangledHeart would make. You've heard of him, right? This is just so creative. I have no idea where this is going.
It's just hard to remember any specific part that stands out. Everything is so wonderfully surreal it's hard to pick out a favorite part. I don't know why you waited years to submit this. What did Livecorpse have to do with this? Wow, he's been dead over twelve years!