A bit too short, but still great. I especially like how he gets frustrated with her at the end. That's what I would do in that situation. It's also great how they finally hook up! Yeah, it's a pretty sweet story. The cartoonish gags were great.
I appreciate how unpredictable it is. The fact that they don't take gives them a lot of personality. Those little perks are great. I hope you always put your new stuff here. I get the color joke now.