It was pretty hard to tell what was going on at the end. Did they get into a time machine? But I digress. I appreciated some of this for encouraging me to give blood. I would never do it, as I'm simply too scared. I didn't think the artwork was that good at all. It just didn't have much going on.
The text on the bottom of the screen got old fast. I do like what you are trying to do. I imagine there are people who do stuff like this. I guess I can't give you guys flak for never wanting to do anything good. Still not a fan of yours.