Does need work
It must be pretty devastating to have this win the "Turd Of The Week" award. I can easily tell that is your first submission, and there are a lot of things you need to improve on. First of all, you need to have a lot more going on than just addressing yourself like that. You also need to work on the animation as the drawings just look so crude. There needs to also be a change of scenery as the same thing the entire time does not work well with most people. It was weird how it started looping, then stopped, and looped again.