Ericho's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Charlies Life Collab]

I'll review each part.

Loading screen - 6/10. It was pretty funny in a really silly way. I can't help but note how funny the low resolution is.

Heil - 4/10. Here's where it gets too silly. The best parts was how you had an original style for the mouths as well as the semen. Using those voices are a bit annoying, though.

Hirarious - 2/10. This one was easily the worst in the series. Nothing at all seemed to happen in this. I don't know who this Charlie is, but he probably won't care.

Heil responds:

sadf

[Space Nazis In Space]

In Space!

This was interesting to watch because it opened up in such an awesome way. I would have preferred the animation continue to be like that, but that was the joke. Some of the animation in the presentation wasn't too bad. The spaceships seem well designed. I think it might be the first space attack cartoon I've ever seen that had Barrack Obama in it. My, RibsClock looks so delicious. The dialogue was too incomprehensible to understand.

I knew from the outside of the White House the art was going to shift. You have done this flash flood good with something well animated (at least in the beginning). You can never have Nazis from space and make that not cool. I love the demonic "Doom" Hitler at the end. It was great to see such high animation in the lava or whatever that red stuff was.

CorpseGrinderClock responds:

Yeah I'll admit part of the reason for the silly ending was time constraints but I frankly prefer it this way

I think I did pretty well for, what, three days?

[intro test]

A big nono

While the animation isn't half bad for this, the main fault is that it's a test. Those kinds of things are not popular on this website. At least make a button so that we can replay the thing. It's hard to describe this submission because there isn't a lot that happens. I actually do think that you have some talent in terms of art because this drawing itself isn't that bad. The best part was probably the way the blood comes off her fingers.

Still, that seems more like the kind of thing you would want in an art submission. I don't see why it would not say "Presents". It makes sense to me. The audio isn't that bad, but the problem is that it is simply too short in order for it to be a decent submission in its own right. An interesting story would do a lot of good for this.

evilblackcat13 responds:

well.. sorry that i've put a test because i'm still learning.....the thing of presents is that , at first, it was written «evil never looked so good» (which is my motto for most of the stories not yet published)

here's the original thing i've did http://evilblackcat13.deviantart.com/
art/4-Dark-Evilblackcat13-2011-202453 606

[This is TETRIS!]

Sparta?

Ah yes, I really should have seen King Leonadias (or however his name is spelled) emerge from this sooner or later. He was easily the coolest thing in this cartoon. At first I thought it was going to be a more generic Tetris parody. That still didn't make it something I would recommend, though. For one, it's a loop, which I guess isn't your fault considering the problems some people have to work through. It was weird how the same scene happened twice.

At least the Tetris graphics were fairly decent in their own right. Of course, I imagine it would not be that difficult. Next time, I suggest that you make the action move faster, especially with the king. You could also work on a more original song. It makes you realize why Tetris is so popular in how simple its design is.

ToxMace responds:

Yo I made this on Windows movie maker and ms paint that's why it sucks.

[The Ultimate Orb...]

Too funny

This was a great entry in the TOFA series, because it was just so random. Geez, I have followed Kirbopher since he started, and I can't even tell who he voiced in this! From the description, I actually thought this was going to be a lot more serious. It was cool how there were so many things going on with this. Even the end credits that showed the reflections of hte creators was cool! The title seemed like it would be a game.

I love how amazingly dopey, but also charming everyone sounded. If there was something that could dispense cupcakes like that, I would fight for it. It kind of reminded me of the random stuff that LazyMuffin makes. It's of course great in its own right because it's ironic talking candy would want something that dispenses sweets. While not that detailed, the body movements were good.

CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks man :D
If you would like to know - Kirbopher voiced the lollipop and the main kid.
And that's quite nice of you to compare me to lazymuffin :O

[42 Boxes ACT 1]

Great!

Wow, these are some of the most colorful and vibrant voices I have ever heard in a flash cartoon! It was just amazing with how fun everybody sounded. At first I thought you had taken audio from something else, because it seemed too cool to be your own! It's amazing how much depth these characters have in appearances despite only being pixels. Every character has an extremely wacky personality. The coolest thing is that they are all different degrees of wackiness!

I could just go on all day about how cool these characters are. It's sweet how they're involved in such a mundane activity like getting the groceries. It's the kind of thing that could happen in real life only without the magic. Everyone was just jumping all around and acting silly in this. I do hope this becomes a full fledged series, and I would love to be an actor!

Mutteo responds:

Thanks. The people working on the project with me really did have a good time working on this stuff. Durinh the hiatus, I did have time to vamp up my skills so visually the work has improved and I have learned a bit more with the work and it will continue to shine as I work on more stuff.

Yes each of these characters have an interesting personality that stand out on their own. Some of them are people I knew in college and I wanted to characterize them in pixel format. Though the drama with voice actors was hard, it is nice to see everything come together. This could potentially be a series, but I am not sure at this point, though act 2 is in the works.

Currently I do not need any voice work done but I'll keep it in mind in the future. Thx for your interest in my work <3

[Cat Vader 2]

He wasn't in Episode 2!

This is a premise where you can simply do no wrong because it combines two things that are really popular on the Internet. The most impressive thing was how all of Darth Vader's lines are always related to what was going on in the situation. I expected Cat Vader to force choke someone. The animation was not the best, but it doesn't matter because it's so darn funny. I especially love watching this little guy point his paws at people. When he was talking to the guy in bed, I thought he was saying, "Growl".

He was actually saying, "Meow" or something like that. There's no real story, it's more of a series of jokes that are used with this character. That's all you need to make this great. I didn't even notice until now how good Cat Vader looks with the whiskers around his helmet. At least his entire body did not get singed, but he is black.

koit responds:

Glad you like it.

He's a "rowl"-er. That's the sound Vades likes to make, not a meow, a rowl.

[CD10 Return of the cock]

Oh, a penis

I suggest you try to do better on a variety of things like some music. I know it was just a single image but it seems like there could have been some sound in this. If not that, there could have been an infinite loop showing some crude song. I realize that a lot of flashes are like that and it makes them a bit better. The only thing I liked was how it was kind of funny how the penis was shown. Every one of those fruits does look like parts of an actual penis!

You rarely see fruit clocks and vegetable clocks together like that. Maybe you were trying to promote some sort of peace? I was not even aware that the cock had been away. How can a cock take a shit anyway? I really should stop wondering right now how a cock could have shit come out of itself in any way at all.

icyh3ll responds:

You are thinking way to into this... This was just a clock day submission. To put effort into one is a real waste of time. I used powerbullet to make this in about 5 minutes just to have something to submit. Considering one of the highest rated Clock Day submissions is the letter B, I'd say I put too much effort into this. This is the second submission of Clock Day 2010.