Ericho's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aura Test(Done in 5 mins)]

Huh?

This did not work out that well because there is so little that happens in this. It's not so much that the sprite work is bad, it's just that it was way too brief. Tests are not the sort of thing that you should submit to this website anyway. Look for personal stuff on the Internet or your website to release this. The sprite work isn't even that impressive. All of the characters are yellow or something and it just looks silly.

The background does make it look unique. The big problem is that it's just the same music over and over. I am not a fan of "Bleach" so I can not recognize this music. The best thing to do is to at least show some action or the enemies in your test. Put a lot more effort into this, and I bet the final product could be much better.

LSWBeast responds:

if ur a fan of dragon ball z u should know whats the videos about!!!!!
and dont worry im making a stroy Ralick Z its going to be neat and awesome for ppl to enjoy

[Bunnykill 5 Part 1]

Unrelated?

Yeah, it's like those cartoons that have nothing to do with each other to a lack of continuity. Basically, these guys can do whatever they want and nothing sticks. This was a really fantastic entry in the series and originally I wasn't that turned on because it seemed to start slow. Boy oh boy, did that get made up for as it got a trillion times cooler as it went on! This is easily the longest thing you have ever worked on, clocking in at about 12 minutes! It makes me want to see a full length movie made by you!

The characters are as awesome as ever. The coolest weapon would have to be the gun that doubles as a sword. The light saber battles are always great to look at and while they are not stronger than swords, at least they are cooler. I like how there's so many things going on. One loose laser sword hits a guy in the head and makes him an even darker color. Don't worry, Snowball should be back eventually.

Mottis responds:

The thing that hit the enemy in the head was actually just an electric stun baton, unlike the swords that the ninjas were using. But yeah :)
thanks.

[Titanic: The Untold Story]

No plot?

It was funny to see Salad Fingers among the vegetable crowd. He would have been too obsessed with the red water to care about fighting. I guess the tomato was struggling with himself because he's not technically a vegetable. Another cool thing was how good the animation was. This is still a billion times more intelligent than those two stupid cartoon movies they made about the Titanic. It's weird how the one guy choked on a potato.

I had idea that scene was when I was supposed to get into it! I love how this is in the informative genre. Finally, something that involves vegetables killing things when it has nothing to do with the Clock Crew! The music was interesting and everything was completely random but that works on this website! Were the couple at the beginning supposed to be Jack and Rose?

Merol responds:

A lot of people consider the tomato a vegetable, but he was struggling with himself because he saw his family die, which is now a bottle of ketchup, that's why he was all traumatized.

Nooo, there were a lot of couples in the Titanic!

THANKS A LOT!

[Charlies Life Collab]

I'll review each part.

Loading screen - 6/10. It was pretty funny in a really silly way. I can't help but note how funny the low resolution is.

Heil - 4/10. Here's where it gets too silly. The best parts was how you had an original style for the mouths as well as the semen. Using those voices are a bit annoying, though.

Hirarious - 2/10. This one was easily the worst in the series. Nothing at all seemed to happen in this. I don't know who this Charlie is, but he probably won't care.

Heil responds:

sadf

[Space Nazis In Space]

In Space!

This was interesting to watch because it opened up in such an awesome way. I would have preferred the animation continue to be like that, but that was the joke. Some of the animation in the presentation wasn't too bad. The spaceships seem well designed. I think it might be the first space attack cartoon I've ever seen that had Barrack Obama in it. My, RibsClock looks so delicious. The dialogue was too incomprehensible to understand.

I knew from the outside of the White House the art was going to shift. You have done this flash flood good with something well animated (at least in the beginning). You can never have Nazis from space and make that not cool. I love the demonic "Doom" Hitler at the end. It was great to see such high animation in the lava or whatever that red stuff was.

CorpseGrinderClock responds:

Yeah I'll admit part of the reason for the silly ending was time constraints but I frankly prefer it this way

I think I did pretty well for, what, three days?

[intro test]

A big nono

While the animation isn't half bad for this, the main fault is that it's a test. Those kinds of things are not popular on this website. At least make a button so that we can replay the thing. It's hard to describe this submission because there isn't a lot that happens. I actually do think that you have some talent in terms of art because this drawing itself isn't that bad. The best part was probably the way the blood comes off her fingers.

Still, that seems more like the kind of thing you would want in an art submission. I don't see why it would not say "Presents". It makes sense to me. The audio isn't that bad, but the problem is that it is simply too short in order for it to be a decent submission in its own right. An interesting story would do a lot of good for this.

evilblackcat13 responds:

well.. sorry that i've put a test because i'm still learning.....the thing of presents is that , at first, it was written «evil never looked so good» (which is my motto for most of the stories not yet published)

here's the original thing i've did http://evilblackcat13.deviantart.com/
art/4-Dark-Evilblackcat13-2011-202453 606

[This is TETRIS!]

Sparta?

Ah yes, I really should have seen King Leonadias (or however his name is spelled) emerge from this sooner or later. He was easily the coolest thing in this cartoon. At first I thought it was going to be a more generic Tetris parody. That still didn't make it something I would recommend, though. For one, it's a loop, which I guess isn't your fault considering the problems some people have to work through. It was weird how the same scene happened twice.

At least the Tetris graphics were fairly decent in their own right. Of course, I imagine it would not be that difficult. Next time, I suggest that you make the action move faster, especially with the king. You could also work on a more original song. It makes you realize why Tetris is so popular in how simple its design is.

ToxMace responds:

Yo I made this on Windows movie maker and ms paint that's why it sucks.

[The Ultimate Orb...]

Too funny

This was a great entry in the TOFA series, because it was just so random. Geez, I have followed Kirbopher since he started, and I can't even tell who he voiced in this! From the description, I actually thought this was going to be a lot more serious. It was cool how there were so many things going on with this. Even the end credits that showed the reflections of hte creators was cool! The title seemed like it would be a game.

I love how amazingly dopey, but also charming everyone sounded. If there was something that could dispense cupcakes like that, I would fight for it. It kind of reminded me of the random stuff that LazyMuffin makes. It's of course great in its own right because it's ironic talking candy would want something that dispenses sweets. While not that detailed, the body movements were good.

CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks man :D
If you would like to know - Kirbopher voiced the lollipop and the main kid.
And that's quite nice of you to compare me to lazymuffin :O