Too simple
This is not that good of a submission, mostly because it has so few things in it. I guess this was supposed to be an early work, but there are so many things to improve on. You really needed some music, especially considering there was no dialogue. There is really no action at all except for the very end with the explosion. The explosion was probably the best part; this really needs better work with animation and coloring effects. The story is not terrible but the artwork just looks very shabby.