Hard to understand
Well, I can at least say it was nice of you to make the comment that Tom Fulp was handsome. Next time I suggest putting in more than just a pure green background. It would also be better if you put in some dialogue instead of that "buhdubuduh" thing. I guess there was supposed to be some deep meaning to this or maybe it was just a joke flash. If the language is going to be incomphrensible, you should put some action to it. I have nothing against you, it's just that it seems like you could do much better.