Needs improvement
It was a pretty interesting story I suppose and I did think it was cool, how, at the end, StrawberryClock gave his clock, uh, thing to you, and it was interesting that you started with a note on who you were, but the animation was just too simple. It didn't look like it took a lot of frames to make and there should have at least been some variety of color with something that looked that lowbrow. Still, at least you made your first flash movie.