Pretty nice
I could tell that this was going to be a takeoff of the "Cyanide & Happiness" cartoon, which I am a huge fan of. I think this does a great job of living up to the flawless animation style they use. While the punchline may not have been perfect, this still had a lot of good stuff in it. It does seem like a lot of effort was put into it. My suggestions would be that next time, you make it longer and have the dialogue be more understandable. However, I guess the bad dialogue was part of the joke.