You made a lot of spelling errors in your commentary. You spelled tried "tryed". Well, you can always turn it off. This still had an amazing amount of effort put into it. I'm glad sprite work was popular up to this point. It was great to see the different areas.
You can tell so much without words. Everything moves so fast. Wow, that was too short! Of course, that did make me want more. The music was fantastic. The last part's still the best.