I was quite surprised at how the animation doesn't hold up. Your other stuff is so much better! Still, we all have to start somewhere. I really did like the beginning of this story. It's been so long since I've seen it. I'm just so used to watching later episodes of the series.
That's when it gets a lot better. I still liked parts of it. You know how to introduce your characters. I do think it was a bit too long. I missed sexy Joanna.