This was a pretty good cartoon. True, for the most part, your other cartoons are better, but this is still nice. I could tell it was being told from the perspective of a kid. He could have better vocal cords. I do like how you reminded me of when I was little. The animation was pretty much as good as ever.
This seemed like an interesting experiment for you. I thought the main monster was pretty well designed. That was even kind of a nice twist at the end. Well, you didn't write this, the kid did. I appreciate how you wanted to do something nice for him.