Happy Clock Day, I guess
It is hard to hate this, because it seems as though you are trying to create something that is truly going to help people. I, as a prolific reviewer, have seen this and I would be introduced in doing a voice or at least appearing as a character. Other people have done that, but I have yet to do a voice. The layout was fairly ordinary and it defintley needs some tweaking. I guess this only sometimes happens, but I had trouble keeping up with what was being sad. It is an experimental thing, after all.