Hey, it was my brother's birthday yesterday! Anyway, this was absolutely hilarious. Welcome to becoming a cartoonist here! They're some of the most cartoonish stuff I've come across in awhile! The voices and tone just fit everything perfectly. I loved the credits where she got swept up.
Damn, I wish this was a series. I'd love to learn more about these characters and see this as a full fledged series. It certainly can become one. It's easy to tell that you're into bakertoons. It was kind of too short and one note, but still great.