Fairly fine way to start
It was interesting to see how this game started and it really does seem as though you improved on your work. It was interesting to notice that everything had elements very similar to the "Earthbound" game. The music was pretty good, too. My biggest complaint is that it was a bit annoying with how you had to press space to go into the next room. The graphics are decent and it seems to have most of what you would expect in a game like this. The other ones have more going on, so I am glad you improved in that aspect.