Needs some work
This was in no way a terrible submission, but did not have that much originality to it. Everyone has done a sprite flash of these characters. I think the weakest point was that it was just too short and needed to have more of a story. I mean, I can not find much that is wrong with the actual action in this, due to the fact that it is very well done. You seem to be talented enough at sprite work, but not at story telling. With some more ideas and concepts, this could be made into a better series, or simply cartoon.