It wasn't bad
It's nice of you to acknowledge in your description that this is an amateur work. That being known, you really could use work to brush up on the animation. The story wasn't terrible, but I felt it could have been a bit more creative and have more punchlines. I am quite impressed you managed to get so many Newgrounds celebrities to work for you! I guess it's nice so many people want to help someone who's raising in his fame. I would know a thing about that, and I hope you get better from here!