This was one of the best things you've ever worked on! It reminded me of Problem Slueth and Homestuck for some reason. I think it's because it's hard to follow the actual story but the imagery is so gorgeous you just don't care. I love how there is so much going on. I knew those green orbs were going to turn out to be bad. I hope this wins Daily Feature.
This was extremely creative, even more so than your usual cartoons! The sketchy style is absolutely fantastic. I could tell from the first thirty seconds this was going to be something I woudl love. It helps that the music is great too. Everything flows together so perfectly. I'm glad you're turning this into a series.