Not too good
I admit that the song that was shown was not too terrible, but it was not much. I guess the single drawing that you showed was pretty cool-looking, but it did not do much for me. I guess you did do pretty poorly, as you even managed to spell "poorly" wrong. This seems like the kind of thing that would be more appropriate for Clock Day. I guess it was a little nice how you did not just show gay sex or something. Add in a lot more of a storyline and you could make at least a decent game.