I had no idea there'd be so much action. It was like a Creepypasta at first. This is April Fool's Day, not Halloween! This was wonderfully done either way. You had good action in a very short time. It was wonderful with how well it was paced.
You have to with something this short. I love how the title made no indication of what was going to happen. A train's a pretty cool place for this to happen. It's all quite finely detailed. Happy April Fool's Day or something.