Again, the main flaw was that it was too short. I'm thinking you could have just made the first two episodes into one. A four part series would be better. The voice acting seemed off in this. I think there might have been something wrong the mike(s). Then again, I'm no expert at this stuff myself.
The voices ARE pretty authentic. It's weird to hear about something abridged before "Yu-Gi-Oh: The Abridged Series". It also could have had more jokes. At least the names are creative. It just isn't for me.