She kind of looks like Tifa here. Well, loosely. I think you need to have a lot more than just her laying around. I'm sorry, but there needs to be more activity. The rendering isn't that good. There's little depth to her. The background's pretty good though.
BrandyBuizel covered this a lot better. The music is okay, I suppose. I just don't think it's worth watching. Her feet just look way too blocky. Well, the title does say it's low polygon.