Well, I thought this wasn't bad. I think the main problem was the graphics. Wasn't this originally an RPG? It's weird not to see a hotel like this. Well, it makes sense in universe. Great to see XwaynecoltX here!
Nice how the most prolific author has made decent stuff here. I admit it was pretty random. I don't know why a ghost is collecting jewels. It's still fine. I like the music too.