Hmmm, that actually wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. It still wasn't good, though. You needed a lot more colors. It was too boring at first. At least it gets better later on. It's certainly better than a lot of bad submissions.
I was right that this was the lowest rated submission for "Too Much Jam". It didn't have nearly enough! I suggest making it longer. It does work as a loop, though. You need better lines.